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It is very easy for one to one can easily give up the career of a language teacher to become a lawyer or a businessman. I, however, never felt regretted for giving gave up a promising legal and business career to become a language teacher, but I have never regretted it. Having battled with China’s traditional mode of teaching for several years, I now would like to help improve teaching in China by introducing new and more effective instructional technology and media into the country. For that, I would like to pursue an advanced degree in education in your country.

I graduated from the major of business law in 1995 from the Capital University of Economics and Business in Beijing, where I majored in business law. At this highly respected higher-learning higher education institution, I received rigorous and vigorousbroad training that was both rigorous and vigorous. After four years of undergraduate studies, the strong logic inherent in law translated was converted into strong logic in my thinking. With the knowledge and skills I attained in the law program, I boast the kind of intellectual maturity that would help me whatever I do. But law was never my first choice for a profession.

Starting from my high school days, I always dreamed of becoming a teacher. In the second year of high school, we once had were required to write an essay on the topic “what do you want to do when you grow up?”. I proudly wrote, “I want to be a teacher!” At that time, Mmy father was, an engineer with a Ph. D. degree, and my mother was, a university teacher of English. But However, my parentsthey shattered my dream and urged me to pursue another profession by insisting that I pursue another profession Chinese teachers, particularly those teaching at the primary and secondary levels, are poorly paid and begrudgingly respected. Chinese teachers, particularly those teaching at the primary and secondary levels, are poorly paid and begrudgingly respected. Being young and inexperienced in the world, I acceded to their wishes when I was choosing my major for the university. , But but my passion for teaching was not never to be stifled forever. Giver Given any opportunity, it would burst out. Upon graduation with an LL. B. Degreedegree, I first took up the position of a supervisor with the China National Container Corporation in charge of its Overseas Sales Department. As the jobthe work entailed involved frequent translation and interpretation between Chinese and English, I persisted in improving my English proficiency by attending various training courses and learning it on my own. I had a good command of My command of the foreign tongue became so goodso that, after about one year, I began to teach it to my colleagues on a full-time basis at the company’s training center after about one year. After a huge detour, my career finally got back on track.

Teaching benefits both the teachers and the students. What makes teaching so enjoyable to me is that it is also a learning experience. I enjoy it the most when my the students ask me difficult questions, particularly the questions that will take a long time for me to think or answer. I have to think long and hard to answer. I also enjoy posing questions to the students, but my questions are never intended to intimidate the students or even test their knowledge but rather designed to stimulate their mindsthoughts. In the constant exchange of questions and answers, both the students and teachers improve themselves alike to the credit of the old Chinese saying: To teach is to learn. In my three years of teaching, I really have learned a great deal. One of the things I have learned is the ability to not only deal with but also strike an accord with people of from different backgrounds. My students at the training center are all adults in a variety of roles and professions. In most cases, they are older than I am. While I stand as their equals,, but I have served as their mentors and role models. By so doing so, I have won their trust and confidence in what I teach, which has helped to make my teaching powerful and effective.

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