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Personal Statement

I would like to further my study in your university as a doctoral student. If accepted, my intended professional direction also would be Material science Science and engineeringEngineering. I graduated from  the major of Material Science and Engineering in Sichuan university University of science Science and engineering Engineering major in material science and engineering as a provincial level outstanding graduate in juneJune 2015.

During my college life, I have won a the national scholarship honor and the three times of first-class academic scholarship honorfor three times. I was admitted to Chongqing university University for graduate leaningpursuing my master degree after passing, since passed the unified national postgraduate entrance exam in juneJune 2015. Now, I’m a first-year postgraduate student in Chongqing universityUniversity, majored in Material science Science and engineeringEngineering. I hope to become a professor and havewith my own laboratory and scientific research team. Of course, it is not easy to realize the goal is not easy and I need a long time effortto pay great efforts. ButHowever, as long as I work hard, this goal will be to near me step by stepfinally come true. Reading a great number of literatures is my first task to makesenable me to standing on the shoulder of others and. Thus, I can obtain enough knowledge about the field of my research direction, and then make sure that the consequent work is necessary.

Mean while, it is more important to summing upsummarize the experimental methods, analytical measures, traditional concepts and new ideas about the experimental phenomenon is more important, which could give me a more systematized and comprehensive insight. To master relevant laboratory equipment is another important thing I should dofor me. Though I can find the operator to assist me, no matter what, he or she can’ t be more aware of mine experiment. Onlybut operating the equipment operated by myself, can I ensure that the experiment to get the best results can be obtained from the experiment. Absolutely, genuine knowledge comes from practice, and practice enhances one’s ability.only the actual action makes idea reality. Therefore, after forming the idea of myself, doing relevant experiment is necessary to verify and, negate the idea or find some new ideas and conclusions. When obtainAfter having some new interesting discoveries and ideas, I will write some papers to share with other scientific researchers.

As a young boy, I like sports especially basketball. Playing basketball gives me a lesson that the team cooperation may be the most important thing and no one can do everything. I enjoy being trusted by my team and I am willing to trust others. Besides, traveling in some places with beautiful scenery is not a bad choice for because it can let make me feel relaxed and happy. I love learning and the every acquisition of new knowledge drives me to learn more. Like other children, I dream of becoming a scientist who is standing stands in the nearest place from the god and leads the progress of science and technology when I was young and I have been struggling toward this goal. With the deepening of the my study, my enthusiasm to science has never been reduced. In contrast, I have great passion for doing research to find, explain and use the rule of the objective world almost makes me creasy. However, I realize that just being a postgraduate is far from enough to achieve my goal. Therefore, to further my study in your university as a doctoral student is a good choicechoose. If accepted, my intended professional direction also would be Material science Science and engineeringEngineering.

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